Saw your comic on new grounds so i decided to check out your site TARTAKA seems to be pretty decent, drawing is great and consistent but there is one big problem and that is why do you leave all those plot threads and never follow them i mean i always wondered who was that guy in gimp suit in the street was also that girl in the beginning who was she what was she like, what were those 1960′s gangster luking guys doing in an arcade or was that a bar with arcade also what was with that train and such it is ust so distracting and i hope you mention them later because well throwing all those random things with no appearent reason creates too much “Big lipped alligator moments”
Saw your comic on new grounds so i decided to check out your site TARTAKA seems to be pretty decent, drawing is great and consistent but there is one big problem and that is why do you leave all those plot threads and never follow them i mean i always wondered who was that guy in gimp suit in the street was also that girl in the beginning who was she what was she like, what were those 1960′s gangster luking guys doing in an arcade or was that a bar with arcade also what was with that train and such it is ust so distracting and i hope you mention them later because well throwing all those random things with no appearent reason creates too much “Big lipped alligator moments”
The comic’s only just begun, you know.